Creating space for student choice. In my PBL charter school, and in my own teaching philosophy, this is a driving concept. If we want our students to be curious, to dig deeply into their learning, to produce excellent work, than they must feel that they are engaged in something meaningful. They need to be passionate about it. In my own life, I am fiercely protective of my time. As a mother and teacher, with other passions and a household to run besides, I feel the need to squeeze every last drop out of the day. When I’m met with a task or situation that feels inefficient or smacks of busy work, my response is disgusted anger, and the resulting product is sub-par. I imagine most of us, including our students, feel this way. Time is precious, and time spent doing work that has no meaningful application is time wasted.
In the self-contained classroom, writing time seems the most sacred of all. It demands a good chunk. Generating ideas, organizing, drafting, revising, sharing, refining- not to mention teacher time in reading, commenting, assessing. Even when woven throughout subjects and curriculum there is never enough time. And so, I want my students to be fully invested when the clock starts. In writing, I’m looking to give my students opportunity to explore genres and find their voice. At the same time, I’m beholden to standardized testing and recognize my responsibility in getting my students prepared for it.
To this end, I’m pulling much of my curricular ideas in writing from Kelly Gallagher’s Write Like This.
First and foremost, he advocates for teachers to write with and model their own writing for their students. It is imperative that they literally see the writing process in action. As we move through the writing process- from generating ideas, to graphic organizers, to drafting, revising and editing, students will see me grappling alongside them. Not only does this provide them with examples and the understanding of how writing happens in real time, it provides me the opportunity to write myself! Valuable stuff indeed. Additionally, my goal is to allow students to approach a subject from a variety of real purposes. Take baseball for example: one might write a personal or fictional narrative of a situation involving baseball, or maybe one is more interested in researching and explaining the evolution of the game, or perhaps instead one prefers to write and defend their opinion as to why one team is the best. This allows students to recognize that there are multiple genres with which to approach a topic, as well as giving them the opportunity to write about what is most engaging for them. If I was asked to write a story about baseball, it would be a poor story as I have absolutely no experience in the game. However, I’m interested in history and I like to research, so that avenue would provide a richer experience for me.
Ultimately, my job as a writing teacher is to help students find and develop their voice as they explore topics that they care to write about. In this way, hopefully, my students of writing become adults who can recognize and articulate multiple perspectives in a given situation. Ours is a multi-layered world with many viewpoints. We need our young people to be able to research and inform articulate opinions, and develop personal narratives they are proud to share. I mean for my time in their lives to be a step in that direction.
Sarah,
Thank you so much for your presentation! I really appreciated the graphic organizer for setting up ideas, I am totally using that in my classroom this year. You shared some really powerful tools that will be incredibly useful with my students. I really love this approach, it all made sense and it felt natural to find where your own prompt based on the place you chose. I am so inspired by your publishing night and I would love to do something like that with my students too.
Thank you for the inspiration!
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Sarah,
I really enjoyed your presentation and it gave me a lot to think about. I think we are all grappling with the limitations pushed on us by the ever presenting Test. I think our students have so much more to think about as writers in the world today. There are tons of venues to be real world writers literally right at their fingertips. The idea of “being a writer” when our school systems were designed was extremely limited, mainly to newspaper journalists and writers of books. Our kids today can be published reviewers of services and products, writers of code, bloggers, vloggers. They can share information through infographics and on and on. I love the many opportunities to think about the purposes, audiences and genres of writing that this unit lends to students. I love your reflective stance as a teacher as well. I appreciated the way you responded to and encouraged our comments in the chat today, you demonstrate grace and kindness with us and I know that is a gift to your students. Thanks for filling my brain with too much today. Lol. I have really enjoyed your participation in the SI.
Amanda
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Thank you Amanda. You give me a ton to think about too! I have absolutely loved being part of the writing project- I hope to participate again someday. This was so great.
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Sarah,
What great ideas! I am already thinking of ways to use MyMaps in my classroom. I love that the students can collaborate on the same map and explore each other’s work. I loved the idea of mapping the settings of each story as well. I am bursting with enthusiasm about this whole project. Next year I will have 40 minutes of unstructured time, and I was planning on creating projects they can choose from. The graphic organizer would be perfect for this. Thank you so much for sharing today!
Sincerely,
Emily Peery
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Dear Sarah,
Thanks so much for the lesson on place. I’m embarrassed to say I never thought about how complex the word place is. It seems simple. Your videos gave me a lot to think about. Very effective. I also really love the My Maps activity that we did. New to me. The Real World Writing G.O. was very helpful in organizing my thoughts and I liked the way it is set up with different genres. I wrote about all three in the organizer and then picked the one I felt best about (much nicer to have you ask which we wanted than to assign!) Lots of good discussion and ideas about incorporating different modes of learning information and presenting information during this whole workshop.
Thanks for sharing,
Barbara
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I really enjoyed the presentation. During the break out, Kevin was talking about how important it is for the students to feel excited about what they are writing about and to have ownership of it. Your graphic organizer, and the writing assignment itself, is a great way of allowing the students to take ownership. I know I did. I am definitely stealing these ideas for my class next year.
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Dear Sarah,
This was really carefully crafted and thought out. I love how it started really big with the idea of PLACE, but then you were able to bring it in closer with each activity we did. I liked that we got to really explore PLACE in our own way by picking someplace in California. And what a great way to bring California to life for students by really expanding how they can discover and share their ideas. I love how you took KG’s ideas and applied them directly to your classroom practices for 4th grade. That is what makes K-14 professional development so valuable. I have so many take-aways that I will bring back to my high school students. I think really what struck me was letting the students choose which genre they wanted to present the information in. I always do separate projects for each genre, but I think this is way smarter and better use of our very limited time.
I am wondering how you approach students that maybe don’t have a lot of places they have been or are meaningful to them? I’m also wondering if you find all the pins super concentrated because most of the places they have been are local and maybe that could turn into a cool writing marathon by visiting other people’s places in the neighborhood? Just kinda thinking out loud while I’m typing here.
Really interesting presentation, super engaging, and I’m taking a lot of great stuff back to the classroom with me. Thanks Sarah!
Lindsey
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Sarah – thank you for the wonderful Narrative presentation. As a 4th grade teacher as well you gave me a lot of new and useful ideas to take back for this coming year. I really liked the graphic organizer to help get started. In the book I am reading, it talks about giving students choice in their writing topics and your 5 minute activity to have us write down places in Ca was great – I then was all-in because I got to choose my topic. Lastly, the mapping activity is wonderful – thought of a lot of different ways to use in my class. Thank you for a wonderful presentation! – Kevin
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I love what you said about feeling like you were all-in after generating the list. I felt the exact same way!
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Sarah,
I remember 4th grade being one of my favorite years in school. Your lesson reminds me of what a wonderful year of learning that is for kids and your students are so lucky that you are the one leading the way. Your project is so relevant, age-appropriate, engaging, and meaningful. I enjoyed every minute of your presentation and was left feeling a little sad that I was not able to write about my special place. All of your activities leading up to the writing piece were scaffolded so wisely and calculated perfectly. It makes me so excited for my second graders that head your way.
The way you used the technology pieces in your project were just what kids (and apparently adults) need for buy in. Your videos were poignant and real and a great entry activity. Your activity using google maps was beyond fun! It was so neat to see the places that people chose and interesting to hear about them in the break out rooms.
I am interested to explore a little more how I can use the google map idea of place with second graders. I will definitely be thinking about his some more and sharing this resource with my teaching partners!
Thanks for sharing,
Chris
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Dear Sarah,
Your presentation was fantastic. You knocked it out of the park! I’m so impressed with your amazing ability to bring kids into the special world of writing while you give them opportunities to make it meaningful and make it matter. Starting with a big idea of Place got everyone’s attention, and right away I began to visualize my all time favorite place. Your entry videos provided that meaningful insight to see all that others endure in their Place, and it allowed me to feel grateful and appreciative of my Place. I can see so many opportunities for kids to experience writing quality pieces with your carefully planned, organized innovative lesson.
Looking at our collaborative google map was the perfect way to make us all in Summer Institute feel connected, and I am certain that your students will be feeling the same way when you introduce this project. Thank you so much for sharing all of your ideas. Your fourth graders are going to be inspired, and I cannot wait to hear about all of the wonderful writing headed your way!
Lorrie
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Hello Sarah,
I really appreciate that your presentation helped me design some new assignments for next semester. The graphic organizer you gave us to brainstorm assignments really helped me plan an entire unit or lesson sequence. I will definitely be returning to that document often over the next few weeks. I was also extremely inspired to utilize the my map feature in Google Maps in my own classroom, after using it today. I think this could be utilized in a number of ways in all my classes. What a great way to get to know students and explore place! Thank you so much for creating such a thoughtful lesson that helped me design new assignments, and further explore an underutilized digital platform.
Allie
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Thank for sharing your interesting work. I will use the form you shared about Real World Writing Purposes and I will work on figuring out how to do the My Maps pin drop (which I could not get to work during our time on Zoom).
“Places” is a great topic for writing in third grade. “Home” would be a very interesting topic the first few weeks of school– imagine what I might learn about students’ family and home life!
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